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The Bandito Gets ReviewedI recently bought and read the novel Bounce of Aces and the Mystery of Duchess Valentine and I have some constructive criticism:The Bandito Gets Reviewed by Nohbdy000
1. If you just tone down the alluring cover-art so that a person going to read it isn't instantly captivated and entranced by the beauty and detail of the overall incredible design, that would help...
2. The story seems a bit "award-winning"... Although everybody wins in the end, it doesn't come off as a sappy Disney movie ending. Were you feeling like an overachiever that day? The flow of events is simple and enjoyable with a steady pace that doesn't bore or confuse the reader: that is not something you want in a novel. The plot itself reads like something that knows it exist for the enjoyment of reading. Not wise.
3. The dialogue is too delectable. With words like "bozo deluxe" and "little biscuit" the characters seem realistic and yet unique. This makes the conversations spontaneous and fun. I don't know who told you that was a good idea for a novel, but t
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